We knew our rough cut wasn't as good as we wanted it to be but we knew the mistakes we made so it didn't matter. These are the things that we have decided to change for the final.
The dialogue sequence we shot was very amateur and didn’t do much for the film. It was unnecessary as an exchange of looks showed more about what was happening than the dialogue that was said. This is why we decided to cut it out, however our clips were short and we did not have enough time to go back and film so we just cut some and kept the most minimal dialogue possible.
Our teacher also said that the storyline was unclear and that we should put in some information about what was going on. This is why we decided to add a newspaper shot and a shot of the G20 summit to show the political side to our thriller.
At the end of our draft we noticed that the tracking shot wasn’t very clear, so we’ve decided to cut it and do a zoom in. We also edit out the footsteps as they sounded fake and out of sync.
The biggest problem we realised was the phone scene; the audience would get introduced to a character that they did not know and to fix this we had to cut very short scenes and edit them to make them look more even.
Monday, 29 March 2010
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